Once you have an idea for a book and a plan for how to get it written and marketed, it’s time to put your brain to activity with any writing exercises. Here are 10 different tips to help your brain get the ‘WRITE’ idea:
• When an idea comes to you, unremarkably accidentally, it is time to compose
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Can a city be a character in a book? Many years ago, in a writing class, I was told that I should attempt to make the background, which was Toronto, my city of birth, a character in my book, Conduct in Question. I have puzzled over this piece of advice for many years and only now believe I may have an answer as to its meaning.
Here’s another question. Can the city you’ve lived in all your life be a character or does intimacy someway disqualify it? I have often longed to accompany Toronto with the eyes of a traveler but regrettably, that is astonishingly hard to do.
I was reading Alain De Botton’s delightful book, The Art of Jaunt. He maintains that when we jaunt, we adopt, if we are lucky, a traveler’s receptive mind-set. Someway, we North Americans walking around Paris or Buenos Aires are much more open to what we accompany than if we were at home. We ask questions. We accompany these places with ‘fresh’ eyes and a meaning of admiration. However, at home, says De Botton, we have become so habituated to our surroundings that we barely notice them.
So, how can a writer hope to make his own hometown an effective background, [given his habituation] much less an interesting character? After all, if we are blind to our everyday surroundings, can we ever hope to accompany them with fresh eyes?
Perhaps the answer lies in the distinction between intimacy and familiarity. Intimacy with a lover suggests deep, cold involvement. Familiarity perhaps connotes staying on the aboveground with a case of borderline boredom. And so, intimacy with one’s home may advise deep knowledge, not boredom.
I found a clue in reading Jan Morris, one of the world’s finest and most experienced jaunt writers. She gave Torontonians a ‘snapshot’ of their city in the early 1980’s. Here are any of the descriptive words she old. The people appeared calm, dispassionate, polite, determined, joyless, resigned and reticent. Wow! Who would deprivation to call us? Furthermore, the city is conducive to diffidence and introspection. This does not channel like a great party place!
But she’s right, at least in part. Torontonians, on the aboveground, are notoriously reserved and polite to the extent of appearing cold, cool and formal. But, as one who has lived a lifetime here, I’d argue that that is only part of the account.
If you’ve ever visited Toronto, you will know a bit about its geography. It sits on a huge body of H2O [Lake Ontario] and is riddled with ravines. These are gorgeous, deep cut chasms left in their wild. If you are walking along St Clair Avenue, in the middle of interchange, shops, offices and cafes, you could lour a path at a bridge and find yourself in an entirely different class. Trees, bushes, shrubs, all manner of plant life await you along with the occasional defeat or fox. And it is amazingly quiet. The rumblings of interchange grow distant and at last you hear the songbirds. It’s a bit like achieving a different country of consciousness.
I love this image. Inside a real abbreviated distance of the polish, glistening towers of banks and businesses, the complicate of interchange, all creating an extraordinarily highly, polished aboveground, nature runs riot.
Doesn’t that make you remember what people are like? Each day, we dress up, putting on our public mask. And we drown, for a time, all the mutinous rumblings of our inner selves. How like Toronto is to its people!
Last year, Conduct in Question [the first in the Osgoode Trilogy] was published. Harry Jenkins is the protagonist lawyer practicing in Toronto. On reflection, I have to admit that Harry is a lot like the city I’ve just been describing. At the beginning of Conduct in Question he is treed in a creaky, old law firm low his adult partner’s finger and in a dead marriage of bill years. But mutinous rumblings lie inside Harry. I’m in my late forties. Am I running out of time? Can I make more money? How much money is enough?
And, what do you know? Harry is reserved, reticent, introspective and case to diffidence. On the polished aboveground of life, things aren’t so bad, but something is missing. It takes murder and fraud [catapulted down into the wilds of the ravines] to burst open his life and get him really living again. In the 2nd novel of the trilogy, Final Paradox, I got real interested in the role masks play in the lives of people. Harry is once again caught up in murder and fraud and this time the question is can love and forgiveness be found amid fraud and deceit? And so, [metaphorically speaking] Harry is blow down into the ravines of his psyche to come up with the answers.
So, yes, I believe I believe how a city [the setting] can become a character and also influence the other characters and themes in a novel. I’ve been greatly affected by the central image of Toronto with its polished, blase aboveground contrasted with what lurks low the bridges. That image is what lies low the Osgoode Trilogy.
WHY WE LOVE STORIES
Tell me a account! Just one more account!
Okay, here’s one for you about a forty-six year old lawyer.
Harry’s cragfast in the backroom of a creaky, old law firm and low his adult partner’s finger. Life is going nowhere and his chances of making real money are fading fast. His woman plans to leave him because, she claims, they are ‘in different worlds.’ Wishing his life were different, he has no idea how to change it.
Next day his adult partner comes into to his office and drops dead. Presently a brand new client arrives to candy him into a money-laundering connive. Although highly principled, he has new money troubles and consequently turns a blind eye to the swindle. [Be careful what you care for.]
When he finds his elderly client dead, just after she has asked to change her will, [suspicious circumstances for careful!] he is forced to hunt down a asynchronous killer, dubbed the Florist. To do so, he must go down into the psyche of this asynchronous killer [and, more importantly, into his own] to believe this psychotic killer with an artistic flair. And he must act him. Just as his woman is about to pack her bag, a beautiful Black, Natasha, comes to Harry’s aid.
At the end, Harry has discovered undreamed powers inside himself and this new Black, who actually loves him. And if that’s not enough, he’s laid act to the Florist plus a corrupt firm of lawyers at the heart of the money-laundering swindle.
What account is this?
It’s the account of Harry Jenkins in Conduct in Question, the first in the Osgoode Trilogy, which I wrote.
The hero, Harry Jenkins, also appears in Final Paradox and a Attempt of One, the 2nd and 3rd novels in the trilogy.
Just click .maryemartin.com to learn more about Harry and accompany a coast appear of settings in Conduct in Question.
After almost XXX years of law practice, why didn’t I compose essays, background out the machinations of money-launderers, replete with diagrams, statistics and charts? [Strange as it may channel, lawyers here can even accept courses on money laundering.] I could have written about estate law and quoted sections of the Wills and Estates Act. But I bet you’d never read it.
Why not? Because you’d much rather hear a account, which brings all these problems to life, with exciting conflicts between good and evil and all the ‘in between’ spectacles of gray. Only with real characters acting upon one another do these problems jump off the page and get interesting. That’s why we tell stories.
In high school, many of us affected Greek Mythology -those fabulous stories about gods, goddesses and heroes. Tales of high adventure! But no one ever explained who made these stories and why. Where did they come from?
The great mythologist Joseph Campbell wrote in The Hero with a 1000 Faces that,
Myth is the arcanum opening finished which the inexhaustible energies of the cosmos pour into human cultural manifestations…The symbols of mythology are not manufactured: they cannot be ordered, invented or permanently burked. They are impulsive productions of the psyche and each bears inside it, intact, the germ power of its author. [Pg 3&4]
Are myths, dreams and stories living ‘things’ springing up from inside? So it seems, according to Campbell. For me, stories are the outpourings of our psyches from mysterious sources. Like dreams and myths, they are individually and collectively an expression of our deepest meaning of what it means to be human.
But isn’t it interesting! Reading Joseph Campbell’s book, The Hero with a 1000 Faces, we learn that account formats and plot lines are also embedded in us. In so many myths, the hero is lifted out of his everyday life and called or forced to do something dangerous. Confronting large obstacles [of a huge difference limited only by our imaginations], he must find help along the artifact and call upon powers inside himself to reach his goal. Once he has reached it, he must return to his class with his prize. Isn’t that the basic plot of innumerable Hollywood action flicks?
Back to our lawyer. A lawyer as a hero? [I’m not joking!]
Events drive Harry from the dull safety of his accustomed life. Next, he is battling antic forces never confronted before. He discovers inside previously chartless powers and abilities. So he must return to his ‘normal’ life with the prize, a good Black and a new apprehension of himself. And all the bad guys are gone! Sounds like a hero’s journey to me.
Did I purposely begin to compose a hero’s journey? Hardly! Only after literally innumerable rewrites, did I begin to recognize that indeed, this was a fib of the hero’s journey. My point is that the hero’s journey and other variations are our innate grammar, language and artifact for myths, dreams and stories. It is finished them that we express our human distance of being.
All the big questions, which are fundamentally meaningful to us, are asked in stories. In a artifact, each account is about birth, growth, death and redemption. And so, it is finished account telling that we fill our real human need to believe one another, our class and ourselves. At least that’s the artifact I accompany it. How about you?
This is to have the least an interesting and entertaining read that covers far more ground than the appellation implies. Told with a huge amount of humor we follow Dodie on her stay to Thailand, where things do not exercise as planned. As she ruefully reflects on in the final chapters, what seems like a great opportunity at the time, had enough flashing warning lights that she should have patterned early on.
The account opens with our heroine employed a mundane office job during the day, and helping out part time at a local golf course in the evenings. Here she meets he husband to be, the club Pro Dick. Although not exactly sweptback off her feet in passion, they do eventually become lovers. It transpires that Dick prior to becoming a Golf Pro has had considerable experience in the construction class. Happenstance puts Dick and Dodie in a position where a two-year contract for a construction project in exotic Thailand is theirs for the action. A free house, bags of determine free money, what more could you ask for? Of course thither is one minor hitch, for Dick to get the full company benefits, he must be married.
Whats a fun loving, adventure search gal to do? Advantageously if your name is Dodie Cross you of course get married, and start packing! Minor things like ‘love’ can be worked on later!
It doesn’t accept our adventurous author long to discover that the ‘land of smiles’ may advantageously be full of smiles, but the company compound where everyone must live is anything but Eden. A repressive management, or to be exact the manager’s woman, has created her own variant of hell on Earth. Endless lists of rules and regulations, the company not only owns the employees, but their wives and families as advantageously. Must-attend meetings, shopping trips, card games, and parties are all part of the cultural calendar.
None of this sits advantageously with Dodie, and she of course decides to buck the group, even worsened she discovers that Dick is a 60 year old activity maniac! Accent at home, accent from “the bosses,” all start to weigh heavily on Dodie, an sudden medical problem also adds to her growing list of issues.
A Broad Abroad In Thailand is a great read, it is written in a real humorous communication, I particularly enjoyed the Pigin English dialog with the local Thai people. That on its own makes this book a hit! Dodie, undismayed by minor and in any cases major setbacks,’bags and crashes’ her artifact finished life. This is a must read book for anyone contemplating living and employed in a foreign land, from marital to medical, the problems are so much greater than being at home.
About Dodie Cross: she is a freelance writer who has received numerous awards for her writing and poetry, among them the prestigious Confederate California Writer’s Conference First Place Award for “Best Nonfiction,” as advantageously as First Place in their inaugural Poetry Award. She has accrued first and 2nd place prizes in her published articles. Dodie has cosmopolitan the class, writing about her life in foreign countries much as Iran and Thailand, as advantageously as American locales much as New Orleans, Orange County, California and Lake Chelan, Washington. Look for her next book: One Strappy-Sandaled Foot Ahead of the Mullahs: An Expat’s Life in Iran Before and During the Revolution.
It’s interesting to look back at the origins of Cosmopolitan Magazine, perception their first subscription numbers (in the 25,000) range, into what it has become now. Its almost amazing how the content has evolved over the years–from a one-time family magazine back in the late 19th century–to what is now; a demographic exclusive to females.
Before cosmopolitan magazine experienced class ample achiever, the initial founders and editors (Schlicht & Field) went out of business only 2 years after the company’s launch. Only after E.D. Walker, an ex editor for Harper’s Monthly purchased the rights to Cosmopolitan magazine did the business really accept off. He didn’t bench for the old artifact of doing things, with an innovative meaning he introduced book reviews, asynchronous fiction, and color illustrations to the magazine.
Only 1 year later after Cosmopolitans booming popularity, E.D. Walker oversubscribed the company to John Brisben Walker, who quickly employed any of the nation’s apical writers. He went on to open a free correspondence school, which he had to retract almost immediately after only 2 weeks more so 20,000 people autographed up.
Cosmopolitan magazine was later oversubscribed to William Randolph Hearst in 1905. He began to expand the magazine by employing apical writers, and investigative journalists. Any of the best articles written came from the recruiting meaning of William Hearst, he employed Alfred Henry Lewis, David Graham Philips, Ida Tarbell, Upton Sinclair, Sinclair Lewis and George Bernard Shaw, all who went on to compose any of the most famous articles for their time.
As decades past, the magazine changed from purely articles to abbreviated novels and stories, sales soared (1.7 Million copies in circulation) and over 5 million in advertising revenues in 1930. Cosmopolitan magazine proved to be an unconvincing achiever, after the 2nd Class Action magazine sales lidded the 2 million mark. Regrettably demand for the magazines content decreased in the 50s, circulation numbers crippled to just over a million, despite the reduced revenue cosmopolitan magazine subscriptions were allay a profitable adventure, even today Cosmopolitan is one of the most subscribed to magazines in the class.
“[Henry David] Thoreau is a keen and delicate observer of nature - a genuine observer - which, I guess, is almost as rare a character as even an original poet; and Nature, in return for his love, seems to adopt him as her especial child, and shows him secrets which few others are allowed to attestant.” &ndash Nathaniel Hawthorne (Journal entry, September 1, 1842)
Most of the greatest poets were not recognized for their activity until they had long been laid to rest. Many suffered great difficulties in their personal lives, which may have led the poet to the wellspring from which they drew their words.
It has been advisable that poetry was old in our long distant past as a creative means of passing along traditions and history simply because the poetic language was easy to memorize and enjoyable to recite. The bards in medieval times were renowned for their consume of poetry.
From free line to rhyme and meter, poetry remains a benchmark in the class of literature. The pursuit of poetic markets remains a positive artifact to further an ancient form of storytelling that requires a primary gift piece the poet’s emotions are largely exposed.
Poetry is the one element of writing that impacts the emotions of writers more than any other. The vulnerable feel of poetry allows a writer to explore circumstances and emotions in a artifact that is difficult to do in most writing genres.
Most poets craft their words as a accent release and rarely apportion them with the class at large, however, thither may be markets available for poetry.
It is accurate that publishers of poetry are about as plentiful as cereal fields in the Arctic, but thither are other avenues for your poetry that can allow you to publish your material in single and memorable distance.
Greeting card publishers are always interested in new compact poems to apportion with card buyers. Poems can also be artfully placed on a line of gift merchandise including mugs and artwork suited for framing.
In our modern era you would be hard-pressed to find individual who is able to make a living writing poetry. However poetry can provide a author of writing income and is often a creative outlet for those who also compose in other genres.
It is accurate thither are those who have little appreciation for poetry, yet the poet’s activity has brought about big social debate and crowning change in our class. Perhaps this is because the reader is invited to apportion the writer’s perspective in an emotional artifact that allows a perspective to be heard with something other than ears.
I never considered myself a particularly sacred, or for that matter, a religious person. But I’ve found that in writing The Osgoode Trilogy, particularly the 3rd, A Attempt of One, that compassion has become real alcoholic theme which runs finished all III novels.
I just found this quote from Thomas Aquinas &ndash “I would rather feel compassion than know the meaning of it.” Certainly, this must be the difference between the apprehension of the head and the heart.
In the first novel in the trilogy, Conduct in Question, we have a man dubbed by the media as the “The Florist” who is a asynchronous killer &ndash so named because he tries to capture the easy flow of the line of the master painter, Matisse, in his carvings on his victims. He is a sadistic killer with an artistic bent.
You may feel [as I do] that the class has plenty of novels with asynchronous killers and so, rather than detailing his rampages, I craved to add any provocatively human touches to the character of the “Florist.” More than anything else, he wants to experience the emotion of compassion.
When he speaks to his mother, who is long since dead, he says in frustration &ndash “I know what the morpheme compassion mean, mother, but what does it feel like?”
As the account nears its conclusion, the “Florist” gets his care &ndasha fleeting meaning of compassion. About to murder his next dupe, John, who is a truly simple feeling &ndash the church caretaker &ndash the “Florist” is overcome with a compassionate meaning and decides to component him.
When the Florist mutely stepped into the room, a antic perception passed over him. Was this what Mother rung of? As if disoriented, he obstructed and shook his head. Was this compassion?
“It’s you!” said John, his grin radiating a sweetness the Florist had never seen before. He saw the muscles of the huge man flex; John’s damp achromatic shirt was matted to his cutis. He saw the dilution but baby-fine hair, neatly combed in place. Short he saw the simple man as more than an obstacle in his path. He cerebration that life could not have been easy for much an imbecile. He should be spared. Mother would be proud of his act of compassion.
In Final Paradox, our hero, Harry Jenkins learns that compassion means stepping into another’s situation and apprehension what it feels like. Easy to have &ndash hard to do! When Harry was eight, his father withdrew from almost all contact with his family after the death of Anna, his daughter &ndashHarry’s sister. Now, years later, piece his father is in operation for a brain aneurysm, Harry waits in the Quiet Room trying to believe how his father could have abandoned him as a child.
At the real moment of his asking, Harry gets his answer as he witnesses the following played out before him.
Harry caught his breath. An unworldly crying came from the hallway. The door to the Quiet Room flew open. A tall, bony Black, act a mauve dress and old shawl, clung desperately to the arms of cardinal men. One was old and hunched and the other muscular and attentive.
The florescent lighting illuminated the Black’s face raw with agony.
“No! No!” As if possessed, she shook violently and her expression slid up octaves. “By the blood of Christ, no!” Clasping her hands to her ears, she began to moan, her eyes ricocheting about the room.
She screamed at the ceiling. “Why have you cursed me? He cannot be appropriated so presently.”
Harry pressed his hands against his face. With all his heart, he craved to pray. He had just witnessed the profane painful of the character at the loss of a child, caused by blind hatred. As he brushed the crying on his face, he began to believe. “God forgive me,” he whispered. “I have known nothing! My father died along with Anna. I did nothing to help.”
And that’s exactly where Harry begins to believe his father and compassion &ndash by actually experiencing his pain and loss. Accurate, you may contemplate compassion and quote clever sayings about it, but if you never feel another’s pain and excruciation in your heart and your gut, as if it were your real own, you do not know what it is.
Do you believe any people are naturally more compassionate?
In A Attempt of One, Harry’s beloved, Natasha has her own struggles with compassion. She is forced to choose between cardinal people she loves &ndash Harry and her friend Sheila. Natasha recollects a conversation, years back, between her mother, Renee, and her Aunt Mila. The boss has demanded that Renee bang him so she can advance in the business.
“Oh, Renee! You poor kid!”
After a long quiet, her mother said softly, “Once we’d done it, his eyes looked so sad and ashamed, like being him just wore him down.”
Mila was aghast. “You felt compassionate for him?”
“No, not really. But I can accompany how loneliness can make you crazy.” Afterwards, we talked a bit, motion on the bed in the motel. He was living all alone thither because his woman had run off with the kids.”
Natasha’s compassionate nature makes choosing between Harry and Sheila so difficult for her. Hurt and angry, Sheila has betrayed Natasha who now considers her next block as she wanders the beach.
Natasha turned and walked easy past the riot of weeds and capable the cottage. Presently she would drive back to the city. She knew Harry was her passion, the one who had awakened her to herself. But she allay heard Sheila’s cry &ndash one of all humanity &ndash because it hurts! Sheila’s pain, from fear of loss, was a pain common by the entire class. She did not reach it by reason, but she knew thither was only one abstraction she could do &ndash act with love, care, and compassion.
Talking about love and compassion… having to decide between cardinal people who love her, [Harry and Sheila] Natasha must find that balance between passion and compassion. Easy to have: hard to do!
Whether you’re an author publishing finished conventional means or delving into self-publishing, you are going to deprivation the feedback of a good editor or perhaps more than one. The difficulty for authors, especially those choosing self-publishing is when do you accept an editor’s advice and make changes and when do you determine you’ve gotten enough feedback? This can be a bad call, and it often comes down to the author finding a happy medium.
The first abstraction writers need to consider is how many editors are also many? In writing and researching Spectacles of Darkness, Spectacles of Grace, over the duration of the project VII editors reviewed the manuscript. Any of them were extremely helpful, action an objective approach and offering suggestions that made for a better book. Others seemed to check objectivity at the door, letting their personal likes and dislikes influence how they felt the account should develop. By the time the book was completed, I felt as tho’ I had let also many cooks into the kitchen, all fussing over the same pot, either adding spices or removing them.
What I learned from the editors I consulted were cardinal simple things. One, you cannot make everyone happy. It’s just not possible, so you compose the best activity you can, one that as many reader’s as possible can relate to. Number cardinal, as an author you finally have to decide if the suggestions editors make are enhancing your activity, or movement it into the activity of individual else. Again, it goes back to the idea of authors finding a happy medium that improves the activity, but is allay your own.
The first editor I contacted was probably the most beneficial. Prudy loved the book, but cerebration it should begin with the hymeneals because she believed this was where the account truly started. She also advisable plotting the account on a calendar over the circumstantial number of years the novel took place. In this artifact, real life events could be woven end-to-end the narrative, giving the reader not only a meaning of place and time, but information that might arouse their interest in other areas related to the account.
Another editor’s feedback was more helpful regarding distance to improve my writing, rather than this particular account. She pointed out little tics in my communication &ndash for example exploitation the same morpheme also often, advice which I didn’t just apply to the novel, but every other piece I’ve written. Her observation helped me expand my cognition and fine-tune my activity. Cardinal suggestions I took issue with was the fact that in the novel Kay and Tim don’t have any children, and that as a minister’s woman, this editor felt Kay should be shown in church more. I cerebration both points had nothing to do with the account and verged on stereotyping. I made this decision from my own experience of knowing childless couples where a mate works in ministry.
One positive aspect of consulting multiple editors is that enough voices may convince an author to make a big change. Out of VII editors, cardinal craved to accompany the ending beefed up providing the reader with an enhanced meaning of spirit and closure. The one holdout was a good friend and her argument was that by expanding the ending, the author was action the reader by the hand, when she felt their imagination could do the rest. Of all the decisions I made regarding Spectacles of Darkness, this was by far the toughest. Eventually I relented and importantly revised the ending.
Authors may also find themselves confronted with one editor who changes something, only to encounter another who changed it back. This was particularly accurate when dealing with the grammatical aspects of the book. The 2nd editor was an old-school English major, so her placement of commas was more extensive. The fifth editor removed what she believed were also many commas and thusly we had a full-scale “Comma Action.” When the last editor reviewed the manuscript, edited commas were being replaced. What I strongly recommend is authors superior a circumstantial grammatical communication (much as the Chicago Manual of Communication or Modern Language Association) and follow it.
Finally, regardless of what an editor suggests, as the author you need to remember this is a personal process. The final editor made a persuasion that would have entailed rewriting the entire manuscript in a artifact that I felt was not beneficial to the account. But because I cerebration the persuasion had any merit, I compromised and trimmed the environment to a point where I felt comfortable, thereby finding a happy medium.
(And How To Keep Them From Fouling Up Your YA Fiction)
In 10 years, will anybody believe you if you have “fo shizzle?” Will they stare blankly if you mention Britney Spears’ buzz cut or Paris Hilton’s jail time? They might, they might not, but the point is this: If you’re a writer of adolescent adult fiction, you can’t afford to pepper your prose with argot and cultural references that reek like week-old sushi.
More than in any other genre of writing, writers of adolescent adult material must be acutely aware of the fact that what’s hip today is ho-hum tomorrow. In a cohort culture where information is instantaneous and trends ostensibly change by the hour, a great piece of writing can easily be spoiled by out-of-date references.
“Any pop culture references to fashion or TV shows change so rapidly,” says Dr. Montana Miller, an assistant professor with the Popular Culture department of Bowling Green Country Lincoln. (Yes, they have a entire department that studies nothing but popular culture.) “In a artifact the effort to be relevant to the adolescent audience by putting in these references is futile because the references are so quickly outdated. Adolescent readers have a high ability to when these things are contrived. They like to have a lot of detail but pick abreast when the detail is being put in their purposely to capture them.”
Since the actual publishing of a novel generally takes a year (not counting the time it takes to compose the first draft), shout-outs to famous people, hot receiver shows, political scandals, or trends will more than likely ring false to adolescent adult readers once the book is actually read. Realistically, pop music stars who today are the focus of intense devotion on myspace will probably be has-beens by the time your novel is published.
Are thither exceptions to this? Are thither people, things, or events that become so entrenched in the prevailing psyche that they will fly as pop culture references? “Barbie is always going to be a criterion for everyone,” Miller notes. “But I believe that real few things become that coupling and as permanent as Barbie.”
Barbie, tho’, has consistently wormed her artifact into the cold dreams and desires of little girls (and probably little boys also) since she was created in 1959. That’s more than 50 years of birthday parties, Christmas presents, and unshackled envy plastered into every little girl’s mind. Barbie has earned the right to be old as a cultural reference anywhere, just by longevity. But what about other less hearty objects? Anybody remember Tickling Me Elmo? Only the parents who clubbed each other one Christmas to hijack the local Toys R Us to make their childrens’ dreams come accurate. The kids probably stuffed the abstraction in a closet someplace, and don’t even remember they craved it.
Media is a bad call also. Music, movies, receiver shows, these all are a huge part of the American experience. But what makes a piece of media reference-worthy? Classic films from the ’40s and ’50s might be a cultural criterion for people of a certain age, but for adolescent adults, the idea is mass consumption, not lasting memories. And people of the older generations had far fewer options for entertainment and media. Pretty much everyone saw Casablanca and knows what it is. Pretty much everyone watched Leave it to Beaver because thither were only III channels on the old black-and-white Zenith, and cardinal of them didn’t activity if the brave was bad. These people common many common references.
Today, tho’, an internet examine of ‘popular culture’ will net you more than 2 million entries. It’s not possible that every adolescent adult who reads will have the exact same cultural references today, let alone remember them in five years, or ten. So, generally, the rule of finger should be to avoid hot pop culture references in your writing.
At least cardinal exceptions to this rule exist, tho’. First, if you’re writing for a circumstantial genre audience that will apportion the same background and cultural history, any pop references will ring accurate. The sci fi geeks who frequent Comic Con all know the Character Wars mythology, and more than likely apportion at least a passing knowledge of things like the Dungeons and Dragons role playing game and the old Character Trek broadcast. Exchange cultures have their own history and language, so exploitation their own internal pop culture references might activity if you’re familiar with that class, but again, you must be absolutely careful that you do know what you’re talking about. Sports, surfboarding, the goth culture, punk music, the gay teenage environment, all these are exchange groups low the adolescent adult umbrella, and all have their circumstantial common references.
The 2nd exception, according to Miller, is the case where a adolescent writes the account of his or her own experience. In that case, pop culture references that might go addled are acceptable because the pieces are more like documentaries or memoirs, and so the point of analyze is that of a real person who is recounting the details of his or her life. One example is a French bestseller, Kiffe Kiffe Tomorrow written by Faiza Guene, a college-aged educatee who writes of her experience as the child of Algerian immigrants raised in Paris. Although labeled as fiction, the novel draws heavily on Guene’s own experiences, and because of this and because of her age, cultural references in it automatically retain their credibility.
Another issue in writing for the adolescent adult audience is the consume of argot, which Miller notes is allay “awfully regional.” The constituent for something that’s cool in San Francisco, (”hella”) is different from the constituent for cool in New England (”depraved”). Although internet and matter messaging argot might appear coupling since most teenagers consume it, the damage change and mutate so quickly that including them could be risky. One current favorite, “pwned” (it means “to be owned or dominated by an opponent in a situation”), actually is a corruption of the morpheme “owned” and comes from a popular online game called Class of Warcraft. In five years will anyone remember that? Hard to have, but it’s probably safer to leave it out.
All in all, the best bet for YA writers is to capture a reader’s attention with coupling themes and characters rather than hot pop culture or argot. “If you’re an older writer writing for this audience,” Miller suggests, “the most important abstraction to capture the loyalty and love of adolescent readers is to focus on themes of relationship, gossip, jealousy, betrayal, the things that keep readers attached and gripped. They respond better to plot and account lines and themes that are getting even more intense in this competitive class today. Kids deprivation to accompany the kind of pressure they are really low now reflected in the stories they read.”
Fo’ shizzle.